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Dear Peter，
I'm writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopeful a girl in her early twenty, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept that at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share her our traveling experiences, and whatever we have in common. And I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learn more about his country.
I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Susan
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Dear Peter，
I'm writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend,
a girl in her early
， and with interests similar
to mine. In my mind，she is someone who is
in traveling, swimming，and playing table tennis. ， it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept
at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share
her our traveling experiences,
whatever we have in common. And I believe I
improve my English by doing so and learn more about
country.
I look forward to
from you soon.
Yours.
Susan
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Dear Li Lei，
I am writing to provide my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior high school and enrollment by the Peking University. I know you worked very hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your effort get rewards. I am sure your parents are great proud of you.I just want you to know how pleasing I am to witness your success. Being admitted by Peking University is a new start for you, who will bring you a good chance to learn of top professors. However, it's good for you to study with such many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.
Sincerely Yours，
Han Meimei
答案：Dear Li Lei，
I am writing to
my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior high school and enrollment by the
Peking University.
I know you
worked very hard
in the past years,
so I am truly happy to see that all your effort
rewards. I am sure your parents are
proud of you. I just want you to know how
I am to witness your success.
Being admitted by Peking University is a new start for you,
will bring you a good chance to learn
top professors.
，
it's good for you to study with
many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard.
I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.
Sincerely Yours，
Han Meimei
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Dear David，
I'm writing this letter to express my sincerely apologies to you for lose the book you lent to me.
I'm very grateful you lent it to me. In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday.
I also borrow some other books in the library after I left. Unluckily, when I arrived my dormitory, I couldn't find my book. I searched all the my dormitory or the road from the dormitory to the library. The next day I also looked for it in the library. However, I couldn't find your book.
I'm sorry I can't give it back to you on time as I promised ago.
But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can receive my apologies.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Lei
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Dear David，
I'm writing this letter to express my
apologies to you for
the book you lent to me. I'm very grateful you lent it to me.In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday. I also
some other books in the library
I left. Unluckily, when I arrived
my dormitory, I couldn't find book.
I searched all the
my dormitory
the road from the dormitory to the library.
The next day I also looked for it in the library.
However, I couldn't find your book.
I'm sorry I can't give it back to you on time as I promised
.
But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can
my apologies.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Lei
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When it came to city and country life，I think they all have their own advantages and disadvantages.
For city life，you know，the traffic is too convenient that you can arrange your life flexible and easily.At the same time，there are many great opportunity for you when looking for jobs.Also，there is no doubt the quality of life is fantastic.Fortunately，living in cities，you will suffer much stress and heavy air pollution.
For country life，as we all know it, the life is peaceful and the environment is beautiful，which is both good for your health.However，it is inconvenient for people to go out.Besides，the communication is easy.
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When it
to city and country life，I think they
have their own advantages and disadvantages.
For city life，you know，the traffic is
convenient that you can arrange your life
and easily.At the same time，there are many great
for you when looking for jobs.Also，there is no doubt
the quality of life is fantastic. ， living in cities，you will suffer much stress and heavy air pollution.
For country life，as we all know it,
the life is peaceful and the environment is beautiful，which
both good for your health.However，it is inconvenient for people to go out. Besides，the communication
easy.
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Dear David，
I read your message on the website coolworld.com say you would like to make friend with a Chinese student who can help you understand how China is trying to protect the environment at the moment. My name is Li Hua and I am a student at Hongxiang High School.
I am also interesting in the environment and would very much like to your friend. My dad work for the local government department，which is responsible for things like cleaning up
rivers and improving on pollution in our area.I would also be happy to host you for a guest in my house so that
you can find out about China and the environment here for myself.
Let me know that you are interested. I look forward to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
答案：
Dear David，
I read your message on the website coolworld.com
you would
like to make
with a Chinese student who can help you understand
how China is trying to protect the environment at the moment. My name is
Li Hua and I am a student at Hongxiang High School. I am also
in the environment and would very much like to
your friend. My dad
for the local government department，which is responsible for things
like cleaning up rivers and improving on pollution in our area. I would also
be happy to host you
a guest in my house so that you can find out about
China and the environment here for
Let me know
you are interested. I look forward to
from you soon.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
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Dear Peter，
I'm writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopeful a girl in her early twenty, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept that at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share her our traveling experiences, and whatever we have in common. And I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learn more about his country.
I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Susan
答案：
Dear Peter，
I'm writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend,
a girl in her early
， and with interests similar
to mine. In my mind，she is someone who is
in traveling, swimming，and playing table tennis. ， it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept
at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share
her our traveling experiences,
whatever we have in common. And I believe I
improve my English by doing so and learn more about
country.
I look forward to
from you soon.
Yours.
Susan
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Dear Li Lei，
I am writing to provide my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior high school and enrollment by the Peking University. I know you worked very hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your effort get rewards. I am sure your parents are great proud of you.I just want you to know how pleasing I am to witness your success. Being admitted by Peking University is a new start for you, who will bring you a good chance to learn of top professors. However, it's good for you to study with such many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.
Sincerely Yours，
Han Meimei
答案：Dear Li Lei，
I am writing to
my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior high school and enrollment by the
Peking University.
I know you
worked very hard
in the past years,
so I am truly happy to see that all your effort
rewards. I am sure your parents are
proud of you. I just want you to know how
I am to witness your success.
Being admitted by Peking University is a new start for you,
will bring you a good chance to learn
top professors.
，
it's good for you to study with
many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard.
I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.
Sincerely Yours，
Han Meimei
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Dear David，
I'm writing this letter to express my sincerely apologies to you for lose the book you lent to me.
I'm very grateful you lent it to me. In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday.
I also borrow some other books in the library after I left. Unluckily, when I arrived my dormitory, I couldn't find my book. I searched all the my dormitory or the road from the dormitory to the library. The next day I also looked for it in the library. However, I couldn't find your book.
I'm sorry I can't give it back to you on time as I promised ago.
But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can receive my apologies.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Lei
答案：
Dear David，
I'm writing this letter to express my
apologies to you for
the book you lent to me. I'm very grateful you lent it to me.In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday. I also
some other books in the library
I left. Unluckily, when I arrived
my dormitory, I couldn't find book.
I searched all the
my dormitory
the road from the dormitory to the library.
The next day I also looked for it in the library.
However, I couldn't find your book.
I'm sorry I can't give it back to you on time as I promised
.
But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can
my apologies.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Lei
短文改错
When it came to city and country life，I think they all have their own advantages and disadvantages.
For city life，you know，the traffic is too convenient that you can arrange your life flexible and easily.At the same time，there are many great opportunity for you when looking for jobs.Also，there is no doubt the quality of life is fantastic.Fortunately，living in cities，you will suffer much stress and heavy air pollution.
For country life，as we all know it, the life is peaceful and the environment is beautiful，which is both good for your health.However，it is inconvenient for people to go out.Besides，the communication is easy.
答案：
When it
to city and country life，I think they
have their own advantages and disadvantages.
For city life，you know，the traffic is
convenient that you can arrange your life
and easily.At the same time，there are many great
for you when looking for jobs.Also，there is no doubt
the quality of life is fantastic. ， living in cities，you will suffer much stress and heavy air pollution.
For country life，as we all know it,
the life is peaceful and the environment is beautiful，which
both good for your health.However，it is inconvenient for people to go out. Besides，the communication
easy.
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Dear David，
I read your message on the website coolworld.com say you would like to make friend with a Chinese student who can help you understand how China is trying to protect the environment at the moment. My name is Li Hua and I am a student at Hongxiang High School.
I am also interesting in the environment and would very much like to your friend. My dad work for the local government department，which is responsible for things like cleaning up
rivers and improving on pollution in our area.I would also be happy to host you for a guest in my house so that
you can find out about China and the environment here for myself.
Let me know that you are interested. I look forward to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
答案：
Dear David，
I read your message on the website coolworld.com
you would
like to make
with a Chinese student who can help you understand
how China is trying to protect the environment at the moment. My name is
Li Hua and I am a student at Hongxiang High School. I am also
in the environment and would very much like to
your friend. My dad
for the local government department，which is responsible for things
like cleaning up rivers and improving on pollution in our area. I would also
be happy to host you
a guest in my house so that you can find out about
China and the environment here for
Let me know
you are interested. I look forward to
from you soon.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
