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基础组Correction 1
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[2024·衡水二中仿真]I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit for our capital city Beijing came true during the National Day holiday this year. I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents on October 1, which we watched a flag－raising ceremony. While I watched the flag rising slow, I sang the national anthem to music, feeling extremely exciting. Then we go to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proud, thought of the old saying that
“He who don't climb the Great Wall is not a true man.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.
答案
I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit
our capital city Beijing came true during the National Day holiday this year. I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents on October 1,
we watched
flag－raising ceremony. While I watched the flag rising ， I sang the national anthem to music, feeling extremely . Then we
to some other famous tourist ， like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proud,
of the old saying that
“He who
climb the Great Wall is not a true man.” Although I was tired,
I really had a good time.
Correction 2
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[2024·枣强中学期中]There is common phenomenon nowadays which parents arrange everything for their children and try to pave the way for their success. That is of greatly concern. I'm strongly opposed of this kind of “love”. For one thing, children become very reliant on their parents that they fail to have independent thoughts or creative idea. For another, overprotecting the children or giving out too much care is extremely bad for our development in the future. I think only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and developing by themselves can they grow up to being independent and become truly successful.
答案
There is
common phenomenon nowadays
parents arrange everything for their children and try to pave the way for their success. That is of
concern. I'm strongly opposed
this kind of “love”. For one thing, children become
reliant on their parents that they fail to have independent thoughts or creative . For another, overprotecting the children or giving
too much care is extremely bad for
development in the future. I think only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and
by themselves can they grow up to
independent and become truly successful.
Correction 3
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[2024·衡水二中热身]
July 24th, ThursdaySunny
On the way to the classroom, beautiful scenery came into my sight. Both side of the road were lined with a plenty of trees, green and tall. When raise my head, I got a view of many lovely birds flying free in the blue sky. Then I lost in thought. How I wished I were a bird, that could go wherever it wanted and did whatever it liked. Impossible like it was, I still felt very happy. How I was grateful that he was a man who had the ability to imagine and enjoy the happiness it brought! As I walked on slowly, a bright smile appeared in my face.
答案
July 24th, ThursdaySunny
On the way to the classroom, beautiful scenery came into my sight. Both
of the road were lined with
plenty of trees, green and tall. When
my head, I got a view of many lovely birds flying
in the blue sky. Then I
lost in thought. How I wished I were a bird,
could go wherever it wanted and
whatever it liked. Impossible
it was, I still felt very happy. How I was grateful that
was a man who had the ability to imagine and enjoy the happiness it brought! As I walked on slowly, a bright smile appeared
my face.
Correction 4
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[2024·武邑中学期末]My father was the biology professor. When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, there I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My father also influenced me through nature walks. He often took me on a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and firefly. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my father and his influence on my life, I feel very luckily. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from her. He helps me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me.
答案
My father was
biology professor. When I
young he was used to take me to the biology lab,
I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My father also influenced me through nature walks. He often took me
a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and . He seemed
know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later,
about my father and his influence on my life, I feel very . I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from . He
me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me.
Correction 5
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[2024·衡水二中预测]
Dear editor，
I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to express my opinion on if mobile phones should be allowed in middle schools. Nowadays mobile phones have become a popular means of communication. However, many a school don't allow students to bring mobile phones to school. I think it is complete wrong.
As we know it, the 21st century is a modern age where is full of information. The mobile phone is one of the quickest tool to exchange information.
It's such useful invention that it makes our life more convenient.
Therefore, if something urgent happened suddenly, we can call for help immediately. What's more, we can relax ourselves by playing games or listening to music before we work hard all day.
I hope the students can be allowed to using mobile phones at school. Do you agree with me?
Yours truly，
Li Hua
答案
Dear editor，
I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to express my opinion on
mobile phones should be allowed in middle schools. Nowadays mobile phones have become a popular means of communication. However, many a school
allow students to bring mobile phones to school. I think it is
wrong.
As we know , the 21st century is a modern age
is full of information. The mobile phone is one of the quickest
to exchange information.
It's such
useful invention that it makes our life more convenient.
Therefore, if something urgent
suddenly, we can call for help immediately. What's more, we can relax ourselves by playing games or listening to music
we work hard all day.
I hope the students can be allowed to
mobile phones at school. Do you agree with me?
Yours truly，
Li Huar
Correction 6
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[2024·枣强中学月考]Yesterday I stopped at a traffic signal.
As I waited for the lights to turn green, a boy approached to me. He was holding a bunch of pens and asks me to buy some. I told him I didn't need some. He explained they were very cheaply. I saw him going to others and no one bought his pens.
My friend, that was with me, suggested giving the boy some money, so she wouldn't bother us. I did give him money by buying two of his pen. I explained my friend that the boy was trying to help his family by doing something. This I thought was well worth praised.
答案
Yesterday I stopped at a traffic signal.
As I waited for the lights to turn green, a boy approached
me. He was holding a bunch of pens and
me to buy some. I told him I didn't need . He explained they were very . I saw him going to others
no one bought his pens.
My friend,
was with me, suggested giving the boy some money, so
wouldn't bother us. I did give him money by buying two of his . I explained
my friend that the boy was trying to help his family by doing something. This I thought was well worth .
能力组
Correction 1
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[2024·衡水二中猜题]This morning I lost my MP3 player on my way to school. It was bought with the money I had been saved for months. Too upset was I that I could hardly concentrate in what the teacher was saying. After class, my head teacher called me out and asked if I had lost something or not. It turned out that my MP3 player slipped out of my pockets while I was walking. And fortunately, a young lady walked behind me noticed it. She found the school guard and gave them to him.
How excited and how deep moved I was to get my MP3 player back! I want to be kind person like the lady.
答案
This morning I lost my MP3 player on my way to school. It was bought with the money I had
saved for months.
upset was I that I could hardly concentrate
what the teacher was saying. After class, my head teacher called me out and asked
I had lost something or not. It turned out that my MP3 player slipped out of my
while I was walking.
fortunately, a young lady 或 behind me noticed it. She found the school guard and gave
to him.
How excited and how
moved I was to get my MP3 player back! I want to be
kind person like the lady.
Correction 2
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[2024·衡水二中一轮检测]During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do everything meaningful instead of stay at home. Before long I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there like a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for three week. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless, what made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. But I stuck it with great determination. Every day I start off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began. Now, I understand that what work means. I think it is really a successfully experience.
答案
During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do
meaningful instead of
at home. Before long I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there
a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for three . The job was hard and
and seemed endless,
made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. But I stuck
it with great determination. Every day I
off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began. Now, I understand that what work means. I think it is really a
experience.
Correction 3限时：6分钟
[2024·冀州中学周测]Last term, I joined in a marathon being hosted by the city sports club. I was so good at run that I had great confidence at winning the match. I was just about to approach the finishing line while one of my competitors fell down and got injured. I could have ignored them and dashed to the end, and I stopped to help him. There was no doubt that the result was not good and people call me loser. Sometimes, it is kindness rather than achievements that are of more important. Though I was a loser in the match, I was winner in my life.
答案
Last term, I joined in a marathon being hosted by the city sports club. I was so good at
that I had great confidence
winning the match. I was just about to approach the finishing line
one of my competitors fell down and got injured. I could have ignored
and dashed to the end,
I stopped to help him. There was no doubt that the result was not good and people
me loser. Sometimes, it is kindness rather than achievements that
of more . Though I was a loser in the match, I was
winner in my life.
Correction 4
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[2024·冀州中学热身]I was very homesick when I was studying
the UK in last year. To fight against homesickness, I make a decision to occupy me with various courses and social activities. I was also active in making new friend. When I missed my family, that was a great comfort to have closely friends around, sharing my joys and sorrows. When I felt homesick, I would turn to my friends, which gave me lots of good advice or comfort. Besides, joined a few clubs kept me from missing my family, which enriched my life experience at same time.
答案
I was very homesick when I was studying in the UK in last year. To fight against homesickness, I
a decision to occupy
with various courses and social activities. I was also active in making new . When I missed my family,
was a great comfort to have
friends around, sharing my joys and sorrows. When I felt homesick, I would turn to my friends,
whic gave me lots of good advice
comfort. Besides,
a few clubs kept me from missing my family, which enriched my life experience at
same time.
Correction 5
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[2024·枣强中学周测]I don't think it's a good idea listen to music while doing other things. That is why listening to music might draw your attentions away from what you are doing. And sometimes it can put yourself into danger. If you listen when you are studying, which total concentration is needed, you will find the results out unsatisfying. If you listen on the road, you may get aware of the potential dangers due to distraction. What's worst, listening to music while riding a bike, you risk been knocked down and hurt as you cannot hear the warning sounds from cars. Therefore, I am strong against this practice.
答案
I don't think it's a good idea
listen to music while doing other things. That is
listening to music might draw your
away from what you are doing. And sometimes it can put yoursel into danger. If you listen when you are studying,
total concentration is needed, you will find the results
unsatisfying. If you listen on the road, you may get
of the potential dangers due to distraction. What's ， listening to music while riding a bike, you risk
knocked down and hurt as you cannot hear the warning sounds from cars. Therefore, I am
