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短文改错精讲精炼03
11.
One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.
while—when
us—him
so-but
has-had
checked-check
call in 去掉use-using
little前加a
that—what
really-real
12.
Like many teenagers in China, most of my spare time was spent doing my homework. As a result, I don’t have enough times to do that I’m interested in even on weekends or on holiday. The first thing which I enjoy when I have a few spare minute is to listen to music. It’s the best way for me to escape the stress of their study. When I listen to music, it is like go to another world. Sometimes, the words of the songs seem to express exact how I’m feeling. Besides, I’m also interested in a fashion and I’m always searching something special that can reflect my personality.
1. was spent--- is
2. enough times --- time
3. do that --- what
4. thing which --- that
5. spare minute --- minutes
6. their study --- my
7. like go --- going
8. express exact --- exactly
9. in a fashion
10. searching∧something --- for
13.
The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what to stop wasting water. One of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.
【参考答案】
The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what
is
how
to stop wasting water. One of the step that we should take are to find ways of
steps
reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and
去掉
then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a
into
it
purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials
where
by the workers so that it can ∧reused. But even if every large city purified and
be
reused it’s water, we still would ∧have enough water.
its
not
14.
One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the
ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent
that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a
while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what
shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to
her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.
【参考答案】
One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I∧told that the
for
was
ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent
tickets
strong
that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a
去掉
hesitating
while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what
But
shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to
should
the
off
her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.
15.
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. More
and more school in China require students to take part
community service during the vocations. Students are often
seeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and visit orphanages. Community service is of the great benefit to both those in
need and society. Moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. As modern middle
school students, we should get active involved in community service. By participating, we can learn what to work well
in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. Undoubtedly, both of these are important to
our development. Therefore, they should treasure all such chances.
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. More
and more school in China require students to take part ∧ community service during the vocations. Students are often
schools
in
seeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and visit orphanages. Community service is of the great benefit to both those in
seen
need and society. Moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. As modern middle
social
school students, we should get active involved in community service. By participating, we can learn what to work well
actively
How
in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. Undoubtedly, both of these are important to
skills
all
our development. Therefore, they should treasure all such chances.
we
16.
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I
the
was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.
am
on
Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious
influenced people daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces
of advice is put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. By this
way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.
Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic
flow. But on the other hand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.
In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under the control. And at the same time，
buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles.
Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces of advice are put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads should be built. In this way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.
Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic flow. But on the other hand，this will affect the consumption and make buses more crowded.
In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time，buses should have their own special routes which/that cannot be used by other vehicles.
短文改错精讲精炼03
11.
One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.
while—when
us—him
so-but
has-had
checked-check
call in 去掉use-using
little前加a
that—what
really-real
12.
Like many teenagers in China, most of my spare time was spent doing my homework. As a result, I don’t have enough times to do that I’m interested in even on weekends or on holiday. The first thing which I enjoy when I have a few spare minute is to listen to music. It’s the best way for me to escape the stress of their study. When I listen to music, it is like go to another world. Sometimes, the words of the songs seem to express exact how I’m feeling. Besides, I’m also interested in a fashion and I’m always searching something special that can reflect my personality.
1. was spent--- is
2. enough times --- time
3. do that --- what
4. thing which --- that
5. spare minute --- minutes
6. their study --- my
7. like go --- going
8. express exact --- exactly
9. in a fashion
10. searching∧something --- for
13.
The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what to stop wasting water. One of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.
【参考答案】
The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what
is
how
to stop wasting water. One of the step that we should take are to find ways of
steps
reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and
去掉
then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a
into
it
purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials
where
by the workers so that it can ∧reused. But even if every large city purified and
be
reused it’s water, we still would ∧have enough water.
its
not
14.
One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the
ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent
that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a
while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what
shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to
her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.
【参考答案】
One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I∧told that the
for
was
ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent
tickets
strong
that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a
去掉
hesitating
while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what
But
shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to
should
the
off
her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.
15.
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. More
and more school in China require students to take part
community service during the vocations. Students are often
seeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and visit orphanages. Community service is of the great benefit to both those in
need and society. Moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. As modern middle
school students, we should get active involved in community service. By participating, we can learn what to work well
in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. Undoubtedly, both of these are important to
our development. Therefore, they should treasure all such chances.
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. More
and more school in China require students to take part ∧ community service during the vocations. Students are often
schools
in
seeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and visit orphanages. Community service is of the great benefit to both those in
seen
need and society. Moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. As modern middle
social
school students, we should get active involved in community service. By participating, we can learn what to work well
actively
How
in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. Undoubtedly, both of these are important to
skills
all
our development. Therefore, they should treasure all such chances.
we
16.
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I
the
was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.
am
on
Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious
influenced people daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces
of advice is put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. By this
way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.
Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic
flow. But on the other hand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.
In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under the control. And at the same time，
buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles.
Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces of advice are put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads should be built. In this way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.
Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic flow. But on the other hand，this will affect the consumption and make buses more crowded.
In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time，buses should have their own special routes which/that cannot be used by other vehicles.
