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【写作任务】
据报导，在老年人所有的精神疾患中，由于孤独闭塞而导致的比例高达６７％！
请就这一社会现象写一篇150词左右的议论文，谈谈导致这一社会现象的原因并指出该如何关爱老人。 要点序号 关键单词和短语
① report, up to 67% of the old people, suffer from, metal diseases, result from
② attribute to, several reasons
③ with the development of modern society, in growing numbers, busier and busier
④ go back home, leave their old parents alone
⑤ after retirement, have nothing to do, adds to
⑥ stay together with, no matter how
⑦ organize activities, lead a colorful life
⑧ care for, a harmonious society
life.
⑧ Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society.
【参考范文】
该文层次分明、语言连贯，是一篇很有说服力的议论文。作者注重使用较高级的结构，如多次使用了精彩短语（下划线）、句型（斜体）和过渡词句（加粗）。人称和时态使用恰当，问题的分析到位，解决措施合情合理，反映出作者敏捷的思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。
【句型拓展】写“社会问题”类的作文还可以用到以下句型：
1. As is reported in the newspapers, ...
2. Nowadays, more and more people…
3. It is estimated that about 67% of …
4. The reason why… is that ….
5. It is not only because..., but also because….
6. With the development of science and technology, an increasing number of people …
7. There are at least two reasons to account for ...
8. Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is…. Besides,…. The third one is….
9. To sum up, the main cause of … is due to…
10. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ....; for another….
11. Thus, this is the reason why….
12. If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that…
13. Only in this way can we….
14. Only with combined efforts can we….
实例指导5—— 老人压力问题
【写作任务】
据报导，在老年人所有的精神疾患中，由于孤独闭塞而导致的比例高达６７％！
请就这一社会现象写一篇150词左右的议论文，谈谈导致这一社会现象的原因并指出该如何关爱老人。
【写作指导】
第一步
仔细审题，确立主题，明确要求
根据文字提示可以确定：写作主要人称为第一人称，字数150左右，体裁为议论文，时态以一般现在时为主。
第二步
围绕主题，提炼要点，编拟提纲
第一段：先指出社会现象（① 据报道，在老年人所有的精神疾患中，由于孤独闭塞而导致的比例高达６７％！），然后转移笔墨总体提及原因（② 导致这种现象有几方面的原因）。
第二段：具体分析其原因（③随着现代社会的发展，越来越多的人工作越来越忙，下述发展为④结果他们没时间回家，使老人觉得孤独；⑤老人每天无事可做，觉得空虚）。
第三段：提出我们该如何关爱老人（⑥解决措施一：孩子不管多忙都应多回家看看；⑦ 解决措施二：社会组织各种活动，丰富老人精神生活。），然后点出主题 （⑧ 只有关爱老人，才能建立和谐社会）。
第三步 分析要点及提纲，提炼关键单词和短语。
第四步 恰当使用句型，连词成句。① It is reported that up to 67% of the old people are suffering from metal diseases resulting from loneliness.
② This can attribute to several reasons.
③ One of them is that with the development of modern society, people in growing numbers are becoming busier and busier.
④ They haven’t enough time to go back home, leaving their old parents alone.
⑤ After retirement, most seniors have nothing to do, which adds to their loneliness.
⑥ For us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents no matter how busy we are.
⑦ Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the senior to help them lead a colorful life.
⑧ Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society.
【学生习作】
It is reported that up to 67% of the old people are suffering from metal diseases resulting from loneliness. This can attribute to several reasons.
One of them is that with the development of modern society, people in growing numbers are becoming busier and busier. As a result, they haven’t enough time to go back home, leaving their old parents alone. What’s more, after retirement, most seniors have nothing to do, which adds to their loneliness.
As far as I’m concerned, on one hand, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents no matter how busy we are. On the other hand, our society should organize all kinds of activities for the senior to help them lead a colorful life. Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society.
【教师点评】
该文层次分明、语言连贯，是一篇很有说服力的议论文。作者注重使用较高级的结构，如多次使用了精彩短语（下划线）、句型（斜体）和过渡词句（加粗）。人称和时态使用恰当，问题的分析到位，解决措施合情合理，反映出作者敏捷的思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。
【句型拓展】
写“社会问题”类的作文还可以用到以下句型：
1. As is reported in the newspapers, ...
2. Nowadays, more and more people…
3. It is estimated that about 67% of …
4. The reason why… is that ….
5. It is not only because..., but also because….
6. With the development of science and technology, an increasing number of people …
7. There are at least two reasons to account for ...
8. Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is…. Besides,…. The third one is….
9. To sum up, the main cause of … is due to…
10. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ....; for another….
11. Thus, this is the reason why….
12. If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that…
13. Only in this way can we….
14. Only with combined efforts can we….
实例指导3――医疗制度的看法
写作范例：
随着中国人们生活水平的提高，老龄化趋势的增强，养老保障和医疗改革已经成为目前老百姓普遍关心的话题。请您谈一下我们目前的医疗制度的问题和解决的办法。
提示：1. 我们还是一个农业国家。
2. 很多人看不起病。
3.建设社会化的农村卫生服务网络。 4.加强村卫生机构建设。
保障：safeguard
要有主次之分，详略得当。要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑。也就是写作要细节化或举例说明。我们尽量用看得见、摸得着的东西来具体表达思想。这样才能使文章充实、有趣，符合开放式作文的要求。
4．内容完整，首尾呼应。
开放式作文的答题思路与汉语作文非常相像。首先要明确主题，然后根据主题搭建文章的主体结构，即写作提纲，接着进行文章内容的填充。在拟写作提纲时，要突出主题，有层次，先写什么，后写什么，要层次分明。要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应，展现给读者一
个完整的画面。
参考范文
With the development of people’s life, there are more and more old people in China. Then the safeguard provided for the aged and the medical care are more paid attention to .
As we all know , China is still a agricultural country, and many people are still not very rich , especially some of peasants. At present , many people can’t afford heavy medical fees. Because of this , they may get into deep debt if they suffer from the serious diseases . Worse still , some have to wait for the last day of their life.
According to these things, it’s time for the government to reform the medical care . In my opinion, the first , we should build a large many of social sites of medical care . The second, the government should strengthen the village’s medical organization .
写作练习：
日前有这么一篇报道，引起很多人的强烈反响。报道中说一位农村老大爷得了心脏病以后，因为无力支付高昂的医疗费用，只好在家等待死神的到来。请你根据此情况写一篇作文，说说你的看法。
写作指导：
1. 认真审题，选好描写的角度。确定站在第2人称的角度上写和从存在的问题和解决的办法写作。
2. 选好说明顺序。首先列举出出现问题的原因，第二问题的表现，第三解决问题的办法或途径。
3. 注意行文连贯。段与段之间联系要紧密，后一段应该是前一段的自然过渡和发展。在形式上,段首可用一些关联词来体现这种段与段之间的逻辑关系。
4. 利用文章的内容确定你的论述的内容以后，使你的论述来支持你的观点，为此你可以适当发挥。
5. 尽量使用复合句，使其句子结构逻辑严密，说理性强。
参考范文：
According to the report , we can know that the old man was suffering from heart trouble.
He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldn't stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could afford. It's really another heart attack for him.
At present, many people can't afford heavy medical fees. Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care or have to bear the pain of diseases. Worse still, some have to wait for the last day of their life.
We strongly call for the medical expenses to be reduced. The government should build up a favorable medical system so everyone could enjoy their life as long as possible.
实例指导4――是否克隆
【写作任务】
假设你叫李华，是你们班的班长。在你们学习了有关克隆的英语课文以后，你们班组织了一次主题班会，来讨论克隆对于人类的好处和坏处。请你根据讨论的结果，给《英语辅导报》写一封英语短信， 把你们讨论的内容和结果告诉编辑老师。
大部分同学同意克隆对人类、动物的好处。
一部分同学坚持克隆给人类带来的弊端。
最后说明你的观点。
注意：词数120－150 。
【范文欣赏】
Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you the opinions about cloning in our class .
On the one hand, many students thought cloning would be beneficial to human beings. For example, if a couple can’t have children, cloning can give them a child. We can also use cloning to cure illnesses and use clones for factory work. What’s more, we could clone animals that are becoming extinct.
On the other hand, some other students insisted that cloning had its disadvantages and might cause a lot of problems. Firstly, if there were cloned humans, a lot of people would have no work. Secondly, cloned animals get ill and die quite young. Lastly, cloning is very dangerous. Scientists may create monsters by mistake.
In my opinion, cloning is a science that has already and will continue to have an enormous influence on our lives. We should use it to make our lives better.
Yours,
Li Hua
实例指导5――老龄社会化问题
写作任务:
随着人口的有效控制,医疗技术的进步,中国逐渐进入人口老龄化社会,解决好老人的问题就尤为重要。根据下表提示,请以"How to Solve the Problem of Supporting the Aging Population"为题,谈谈你对解决该问题的看法。
家人照顾老人；工作之余多去看望老人；理解老人社区经常组织有益于老人身心的活动，让他们老有所乐政府建立完善的养老体制，保障必需的生活开支；投资兴建敬老院
注意:
1. 必须包括上述所有内容, 词数130左右；
2. 不得逐条翻译,可适当发挥；
3. 参考词汇:
社区community 敬老院old folks’home
初稿:
How to Solve the Problem of Supporting the Aging Population
As birth control usage and the improvement in medical care, China is becoming an aging society, which poses a social problem. To solve the problem, in my opinion, all people should do their duties. Families should spare time to see the aged at times. If possible, it is better to spend more time staying with them. The community should organize more activities to get the improvement in their physical and psychological health. Let them feel they are useful and needed in society. The government should build a perfect system, for instance, more old folks’ homes should be built, where the aged can enjoy their rest life happily.
In a world where the number of old people is increasing, we need as much understanding and tolerance as possible. Luckily more attention has been paid to the problem. Perhaps getting old won’t be such a depressing thing after all.
1. 作者开门见山,直截了当地提出了一个社会问题:人口老龄化问题亟待解决。然后从家庭、社区、政府三个方面提出了解决的办法。逻辑严密,很有说服力。在短文的最后,作者再次重申了自己的观点,呼应了主题。
成稿:
How to Solve the Problem of Supporting the Aging Population
As the result of the increasing birth control usage and the improvement in medical care, China becomes an aging society and that is posing a social problem. For example, there is no enough equipment for the elderly and many old people live lonely. It seems that they are forgotten by the society.
To solve the problem, in my opinion, all people should help. Families should make time to visit aging people at times. The more time they can spend with them the better. The community should organize more activities to improve the physical and psychological health of older people. Let them feel they are useful and needed in society. The government should come up with ideas to improve the situation. For instance, more old folks’ homes where the aged can live happily should be built.
In a world where the number of old people is increasing, we need as much understanding and tolerance as possible. Luckily, more attention has been paid to the problem. Perhaps getting old won’t be such a depressing thing after all.
实例指导6—电视的发展变化
【写作任务】
请根据下列提示，写一篇120—150 词左右的英语短文，介绍电视的发展变化以及对人们生活的影响。
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