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Hangzhou is one of the most famous tourist city in China, not famous for its natural beauty, but also famous for its history. There are so much tourist attractions in this city like the West Lake, the Temple of General Yuefei and Lingyin Temple.
You can't go to Hangzhou without visit these places.
Hangzhou is also famous for its silk or tea products.
You can go to the Hangzhou Silk City to buy silk articles. And you can either go to the National Tea Museum to have some Chinese tea. The best season to visit Hangzhou is spring, because of it's warm and sunny during that time. The trees are coming up and the flowers are blooming. Every spring, many people went to Hangzhou to go boating on the West Lake. What I wish to visit that beautiful city.
答案：
Hangzhou is one of the most famous tourist
in China, not
famous for its natural beauty, but also famous for its history.
There are so
muc
tourist attractions in this city like the West Lake, the Temple of General Yuefei and Lingyin Temple.
You can't go to Hangzhou without
these places.
Hangzhou is also famous for its silk
tea products. You can go to the Hangzhou Silk City to buy silk articles. And you can
go to the National Tea Museum to have some Chinese tea. The best season to visit Hangzhou is spring, because of it's warm and sunny during that time.
The trees are coming
and the flowers are blooming. Every spring, many people
to Hangzhou to go boating on the West Lake.
I wish to visit that beautiful city.
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Dear Mr. Brown，
I'd like to introduce myself to you.
I want apply for a position in your firm.
I graduate from college three years ago
and since then I have worked as a engineer.
I am good at English and know some Japanese and Germany.
I am hardworking and careful in something I do. I am honest, kind and easily to get on with. Born in 1985, I am still unmarried. I'm sure I am capable but if I am accepted, I will try out my best to contribute to our firm.
I'm sure I'm fit at the position. My telephone number is 16161165616.
I'm looking forward to be answered early.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：
Dear Mr.Brown，
I'd like to introduce myself to you.I want
apply for a position in your firm. I
from college three years ago and since then I have worked as
engineer. I am good at English and know some Japanese and
. I am hardworking and careful in
I do. I am honest, kind and
to get on with.Born in 1985，I am still unmarried. I'm sure I am capable
if I am accepted，I will try outmy best to contribute to our firm. I'm sure I'm fit
the position.My telephone number is 16161165616.I'm looking forward to
answered early.
Yours，
Li Hua
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Yesterday I watched a circus show. A girl rode an onewheeled bike on a small table with a lot of flower on it. She didn't knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a better job. One of them can calculate the number!
The most exciting program was see a young man walk the tightrope. He stood on a rope with a balancing pole in her hands. On his head sat a little girl. Another two girls sat on the red belt tying to either end of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step of great care. Every viewer held out his breath. At last he succeeded in walk across the 8meterlong tightrope.
答案：
Yesterday I watched a circus show. A girl rode
a
onewheeled bike on a small table with a lot of
on it. She didn't
knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a
job. One of them
calculate the number!
The most exciting program was
see a young man walk the tightrope. He stood on a rope with a balancing pole in
hands. On his head sat a little girl. Another two girls sat on the red belt
to either end of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step
great care. Every viewer held out his breath. At last he succeeded in across the 8meterlong tightrope.
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When we were in primary school, we were required to read English every morning. Now we are college students, and keep reading English every morning is still very much important. For one thing, it is wellknown that our memory in the morning is better than any other period of the day. Otherwise, reading English in the morning is definitely good for us to remember what we had learned. In addition, keeping reading English every morning is a good way to practice your oral English, correct our pronunciations and foster our sense of language. For another, reading English in the morning is a good start for a new day. If we read English in the morning, we have high enthusiasm to do other things. In short, it is still important to read English every morning as though we are in universities, especially for those who are English major.
答案：
When we were in primary school, we were required to read English every morning. Now we are college students, and
reading English every morning is still very much important. For one thing, it is wellknown that our memory in the morning is better than any other period of the day. ， reading English in the morning is definitely good for us to remember what we
learned. In addition, keeping reading English every morning is a good way to practice
oral English, correct our
and foster our sense of language. For another, reading English in the morning is a good start
a new day. If we read English in the morning, we
have high enthusiasm to do other things. In short, it is still important to read English every morning
though we are in universities, especially for those who are English
.
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I have a bad back which bursts out hurt from time to time. Yesterday I was out walking while carrying with shopping bags and my keys. My keys slipped from my hand but fell to the ground. The problem was that because my back I couldn't bend down to get it. I was just thinking of how to get around this when two teenages girls came up beside me. Without even speaking to me, one of the girls just bent down, picking up my keys, handed them to me and went on my way. When it was a small gesture and she couldn't have known that I was in too many pain to bend down, it meant a great deal to me at that moment.
答案：
I have a bad back which bursts out
from time to time. Yesterday I was out walking while carrying
with
shopping bags and my keys. My keys slipped from my hand
fell to the ground. The problem was that because
my back I couldn't bend down to get
. I was just thinking of how to get around this when two
girls came up beside me. Without even speaking to me, one of the girls just bent down,
up my keys, handed them to me and went on
way.
it was a small gesture and she couldn't have known that I was in too
pain to bend down, it meant a great deal to me at that moment.
短文改错（3）
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Hangzhou is one of the most famous tourist city in China, not famous for its natural beauty, but also famous for its history. There are so much tourist attractions in this city like the West Lake, the Temple of General Yuefei and Lingyin Temple.
You can't go to Hangzhou without visit these places.
Hangzhou is also famous for its silk or tea products.
You can go to the Hangzhou Silk City to buy silk articles. And you can either go to the National Tea Museum to have some Chinese tea. The best season to visit Hangzhou is spring, because of it's warm and sunny during that time. The trees are coming up and the flowers are blooming. Every spring, many people went to Hangzhou to go boating on the West Lake. What I wish to visit that beautiful city.
答案：
Hangzhou is one of the most famous tourist
in China, not
famous for its natural beauty, but also famous for its history.
There are so
muc
tourist attractions in this city like the West Lake, the Temple of General Yuefei and Lingyin Temple.
You can't go to Hangzhou without
these places.
Hangzhou is also famous for its silk
tea products. You can go to the Hangzhou Silk City to buy silk articles. And you can
go to the National Tea Museum to have some Chinese tea. The best season to visit Hangzhou is spring, because of it's warm and sunny during that time.
The trees are coming
and the flowers are blooming. Every spring, many people
to Hangzhou to go boating on the West Lake.
I wish to visit that beautiful city.
短文改错
Dear Mr. Brown，
I'd like to introduce myself to you.
I want apply for a position in your firm.
I graduate from college three years ago
and since then I have worked as a engineer.
I am good at English and know some Japanese and Germany.
I am hardworking and careful in something I do. I am honest, kind and easily to get on with. Born in 1985, I am still unmarried. I'm sure I am capable but if I am accepted, I will try out my best to contribute to our firm.
I'm sure I'm fit at the position. My telephone number is 16161165616.
I'm looking forward to be answered early.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：
Dear Mr.Brown，
I'd like to introduce myself to you.I want
apply for a position in your firm. I
from college three years ago and since then I have worked as
engineer. I am good at English and know some Japanese and
. I am hardworking and careful in
I do. I am honest, kind and
to get on with.Born in 1985，I am still unmarried. I'm sure I am capable
if I am accepted，I will try outmy best to contribute to our firm. I'm sure I'm fit
the position.My telephone number is 16161165616.I'm looking forward to
answered early.
Yours，
Li Hua
短文改错
Yesterday I watched a circus show. A girl rode an onewheeled bike on a small table with a lot of flower on it. She didn't knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a better job. One of them can calculate the number!
The most exciting program was see a young man walk the tightrope. He stood on a rope with a balancing pole in her hands. On his head sat a little girl. Another two girls sat on the red belt tying to either end of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step of great care. Every viewer held out his breath. At last he succeeded in walk across the 8meterlong tightrope.
答案：
Yesterday I watched a circus show. A girl rode
a
onewheeled bike on a small table with a lot of
on it. She didn't
knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a
job. One of them
calculate the number!
The most exciting program was
see a young man walk the tightrope. He stood on a rope with a balancing pole in
hands. On his head sat a little girl. Another two girls sat on the red belt
to either end of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step
great care. Every viewer held out his breath. At last he succeeded in across the 8meterlong tightrope.
短文改错
When we were in primary school, we were required to read English every morning. Now we are college students, and keep reading English every morning is still very much important. For one thing, it is wellknown that our memory in the morning is better than any other period of the day. Otherwise, reading English in the morning is definitely good for us to remember what we had learned. In addition, keeping reading English every morning is a good way to practice your oral English, correct our pronunciations and foster our sense of language. For another, reading English in the morning is a good start for a new day. If we read English in the morning, we have high enthusiasm to do other things. In short, it is still important to read English every morning as though we are in universities, especially for those who are English major.
答案：
When we were in primary school, we were required to read English every morning. Now we are college students, and
reading English every morning is still very much important. For one thing, it is wellknown that our memory in the morning is better than any other period of the day. ， reading English in the morning is definitely good for us to remember what we
learned. In addition, keeping reading English every morning is a good way to practice
oral English, correct our
and foster our sense of language. For another, reading English in the morning is a good start
a new day. If we read English in the morning, we
have high enthusiasm to do other things. In short, it is still important to read English every morning
though we are in universities, especially for those who are English
.
短文改错
I have a bad back which bursts out hurt from time to time. Yesterday I was out walking while carrying with shopping bags and my keys. My keys slipped from my hand but fell to the ground. The problem was that because my back I couldn't bend down to get it. I was just thinking of how to get around this when two teenages girls came up beside me. Without even speaking to me, one of the girls just bent down, picking up my keys, handed them to me and went on my way. When it was a small gesture and she couldn't have known that I was in too many pain to bend down, it meant a great deal to me at that moment.
答案：
I have a bad back which bursts out
from time to time. Yesterday I was out walking while carrying
with
shopping bags and my keys. My keys slipped from my hand
fell to the ground. The problem was that because
my back I couldn't bend down to get
. I was just thinking of how to get around this when two
girls came up beside me. Without even speaking to me, one of the girls just bent down,
up my keys, handed them to me and went on
way.
it was a small gesture and she couldn't have known that I was in too
pain to bend down, it meant a great deal to me at that moment.
