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2024届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编(第01期):专题06 书面表达(教师版)

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  2024届高考模拟试题分类汇编(1)之书面表达

  注意:

  1.词数100

  2.文章的结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

  3可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

  With all my best regards.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Hua

  【答案】

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  I’m writing this letter to apply for the job as a volunteer that you have advertised on the Internet. In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help those in need live better and become more confident.

  I will graduate from senior high school in June. In the past, I took part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience. My interest and skill in English, communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job.

  I would appreciate an interview at your convenience. I’m looking forward to hearing from you in the future.

  With all my best regards.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Hua

  【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语apply for申请;in one’s opinion在某人看来;contribute to有助于;look forward to 盼望着;In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help those in need live better and become more confident.这个句子运用到部分倒装;In the past, I took part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.这个句子运用到in which引导的定语从句;

  考点: 提纲类作文

  假设你是李华,在一所中学读书。最近收到美国中学生Alex Nelson的来信。作为姊妹学校的交流生,他两个月前访问过你校,听说有个“六艺俱乐部(Liuyi Club)的学生社团。希望进一步了解有关情况。请根据以下要点,给他写一封信,介绍俱乐部的情况。

  成立时间:2024

  六艺:中国传统的文化艺术,如书法、音乐、绘画等

  俱乐部宗旨:宣传中国文化、交友

  经常组织的活动:

  中国书法、绘画竞赛

  免费中国书法课程

  中国文化讲座

  学生社团:Student society

  中国书法:Chinese calligraphy

  注意:1.词数100左右;

  2.可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯

  3.开头语已为你写好

  Dear Nelson,

  I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about Liuyi Club.

  ______________________________________________________________________________________

  【答案】I was so p1eased to hear from you and am writing to tel1 you something about Liuyi Club. Founded in 2024, Liuyi Club is a student society on Chinese traditional culture, especially the Chinese calligraphy. “Luiyi” means “the six arts”, a general term referring to a variety of the traditional Chinese arts.

  Since 2010, Liuyi Club has organized various activities aiming at promoting traditional Chinese arts. Some of the regularly held events include Chinese calligraphy and paining competition, free Chinese calligraphy courses for students in the school, lectures on Chinese culture and traditions.

  Liuyi Club is a place for students from different classes to make friends who have common interests in the Chinese arts. Through various activities, members enjoy rich opportunities to improve communication and teamwork abilities.

  【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语hear from收到某人的来信;a variety of许多;make friends交朋友;have common interests in在某方面有共同的兴趣;Founded in 2024, Liuyi Club is a student society on Chinese traditional culture, especially the Chinese calligraphy.这个句子运用到非谓语动词 ;Since 2010, Liuyi Club has organized various activities aiming at promoting traditional Chinese arts.这个句子中运用到现在完成时;Liuyi Club is a place for students from different classes to make friends who have common interests in the Chinese arts.这个句子who引导定语从句;

  考点: 提纲类作文

  书面表达(满分25分)

  假定你是中学生李华。高三将是辛苦忙碌的一年,不管自己还是父母都会很辛苦。每个家长都是望子成龙的,处在这一重要的学习阶段,父母会对你的生活学习倍加关心。现在请你按照以下内容要点给自己的父母写一封感谢信。

  内容要点:

  1. 感谢父母这么多年来无微不至的关心;

  2. 近段时间自己的学习情况及取得的进步,自己会继续努力,希望父母放心;

  3. 高三过后一定多帮父母做家务。

  注意:

  1. 词数100左右;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

  3. 开头和结尾已给出。

  Dear parents,

  _____________________________________________________________________________

  _____________________________________________________________________________

  _____________________________________________________________________________

  Love from,

  Your son

  【答案】

  Dear parents,

  The hardest time of my life is coming, and I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life. I can say nothing but thanks to you on this special occasion, because words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years. These days I have been studying hard and have performed to the best of my abilities in the test. I’ll try my best to accomplish my assignment in the days to come. Please set your minds at rest.

  After the college entrance examination, I intend to help you do some housework, which I have seldom done before. And I want to learn to cook in order to prepare a dinner personally for you both.

  My dear parents, everything is going well with me. Do relax!

  Love from,

  Your son

  【解析】【亮点说明】I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life这个句子运用到that引导的宾语从句;After the college entrance examination, I intend to help you do some housework, which I have seldom done before.这个句子运用到which引导的非限制性定语从句;

  考点: 提纲类作文

  书面表达(满分25分)

  假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发贴,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

  1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;

  2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;

  3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;

  4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。

  注意:

  1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;

  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

  Hi Sharon,

  This is Li Xia I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin

  【答案】

  Dear Sharon,

  This is Li Xia, I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.

  I felt honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning. I’m good at speaking standard Mandarin. I’ve been a broadcaster in the school broadcasting station for years. When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin, I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. Another suggestion is to practice speaking. As one saying goes. “Practice makes perfect.” However, my English is just OK and I have many problems with my study. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English. I believe we both can make much progress with each other’s help.

  Looking forward to your reply soon!

  Yours,

  Li Xia

  【亮点说明】本文采用常用的三段式,要点齐全,布局安排合理,层次分明,使用高级词汇、短语和高级句式。I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.句中使用定语从句;I felt honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning.动词不定式作定语;When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin,当谈到---的时候,是固定句式;I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. suggest后面的宾语从句中运用虚拟语气(should)+动词原形,同时句中还用了非限制性定语从句;As one saying goes. “Practice makes perfect.”as引导非限制性定语从句,同时句中使用谚语;I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English.宾语从句体现句中。

  考点:考查电子邮件式话题作文

  【湖北省襄阳市第五中学2024届高三上学期开学考试】书面表达(满分25分)

  你校学生会将举行一场高三年级英语话剧比赛,请你以校学生会李明的名义给外教Wilson Smith写-封信请其当裁判并说明话剧比赛事宜。应包括以下内容:

  1.每班限报一个话剧,人数不超过10人,不少于2人;

  2.话剧表演必须用英语表达,时长不超过半小时;

  3.话剧内容必须思想健康,适合中学生观看;

  4.时间:12月10日,地点:校大礼堂。

  注意:1.词数100左右;

  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

  3.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。

  Dear Mr.Smith,

  How is everything going on?

  _____________________________________________________

  _____________________________________________________________________________________

  We are looking forward to your replay. Thank you.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  【答案】

  Dear Mr. Smith,

  How is everything going on? May we have the honor to invite you to be the judge of our coming play contest? We would really appreciate it if your answer is YES.

  The Students' Union is going to hold an English play contest among Senior 3 students on December 10th. Each class can only present only one play, in which the number of participants should be limited between 2 and 10 students. All plays must be presented in English and finished within half an hour. In addition, the content of the plays must be mentally healthy and suitable for Senior students. The location will be in the school hall.

  It is really a good chance to practice students’ oral English as well as to show their talents. We really hope that you can give us some help so that our judgment will be more objective.

  We are looking forward to your replay. Thank you.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  【解析】

  试题分析:你校学生会将举行一场高三年级英语话剧比赛,请你以校学生会李明的名义给外教Wilson Smith写-封信请其当裁判并说明话剧比赛事宜。应包括以下内容: 1.每班限报一个话剧,人数不超过10人,不少于2人;2.话剧表演必须用英语表达,时长不超过半小时;3.话剧内容必须思想健康,适合中学生观看;时间:12月10日,地点:校大礼堂。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。

  【亮点说明】文章段落清晰,结构严谨,布局合理,句中使用高级句子。We would really appreciate it if your answer is YES. would really appreciate it if含条件句的固定句式用于其中;Each class can only present only one play, in which the number of participants should be limited between 2 and 10 students.非限制性定语从句和被动语态完美结合;All plays must be presented in English and finished within half an hour.含情态动词的被动语态;We really hope that you can give us some help so that our judgment will be more objective.宾语从句和目的状语从句在同句体现。

  考点:考查书信式话题作文

  【湖北省襄阳市第四中学2024届高三八月第一周周考】书面表达(满分25分)

  假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛,请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。演讲稿的主要内容应包括:

  认为同学们不必为此苦恼;

  希望能够体谅父母的苦衷;

  建议与父母进行交流和沟通。

  注意:1. 词数120左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.

  Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it.

  Thank you for listening!

  写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:why we are not comfortable about it, we’re not getting into any trouble. we’re not getting into any trouble. you can talk to them,文章还运用了look into,there’s no need,connect with,are bound to等词汇。

  考点:写作。

  应用文写作指导 

  应用文写作是高考书面表达常考的一种形式,题目的设计形式多种多样,一般通过图画、表格、提纲等形式展示表达的话题及相关信息和主要内容,一般都要有一定的汉语提示和要求。写作内容大都包括对信息内容的客观描述,还要发表自己的观点和看法;有时要求提出解决问题的办法或建议。 

  应用文的写作要注意以下几个方面: 

  1、写作的前提是明确目的,以便合理的安排文章内容和结构。除了感谢信、道歉信、邀请信、推荐信、投诉信、求职信等目的较明确外,发言稿、通知、调查报告等也要考虑写作文章的用途或听众与读者的需求; 

  2、写作的关键是仔细审题,通过审题,得出图画、图表或提纲提示信息,并选准表达要点,使其很好的描述现象,分析问题,解决问题,达到写作的目的;

   3、注意篇章结构的整体安排:开篇点题,表明写作的目的(一般给出);描述事物的顺序和思路(按照审题得出的表达要点合理安排,要符合客观实际和人们的认知规律);合适自然的结尾(首尾呼应,提出解决问题的方法或建议)。

   4、注意应用文的语言要规范、准确,要得体;选词要丰富,适量使用结构稍复杂的长短句式,如倒装句、强调句和定语从句等,确保写作信息的含量;注意过度与衔接,确保行文连贯,提高写作的质量。 

  5、选择恰当的人称和时态:以第一、三人称为主,主要选用现在时态。 

  【湖南省长沙市长郡中学2024届高三上学期第二次周测】书面表达(满分25分)

  72.假定你是李华。你想买一本适合中学生使用的英语词典,但拿不定主意该买哪一种。请你用英语给在北京学习中文的美国笔友Peter 写封信,征询他的意见。要点包括:

  1.请他推荐一种;

  2.如果可能,请他代购一本。

  3.下周,哥哥李明要去北京,可以让他捎回。

  注意:1.词数100左右;

  2.适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

  3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

  Dear Peter,

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