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专题能力训练二十二 短文改错
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Sometime in February,my teacher told us about the city speech contest,its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic.Then I carefully prepared for contest.A couple of weeks later,after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists!The final was held soon.I was the sixth to presenting the speech.How a relief when I finished it!After the last person finished,the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize.The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering!I was extremely happy.It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.
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Sometime in February,my teacher told us about the city speech contest,its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.I thought of
my grandma would be my perfect topic.Then I carefully prepared for
contest.A couple of weeks later,after the first round I was
to be one of the seven finalists!The final was held soon.I was the sixth to presenting the speech.How a relief when I finished it!After the last person finished,the judge made their final decisions and announced that I
won first prize.The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering!I was extremely happy.It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.
B
Mr Liu Jin,aging 39,is working in a factory in Shanghai as an chemical engineer.After he graduated from Nanjing University in 1978,he sent to Tokyo University to study chemical engineering.Through her hard work for 4 years,he achieved remarkably results in scientific research.But he received a doctor’s degree in 1982.A Japanese company manager tried hard to invite him to work and promise to give him a good salary but he didn’t receive it.In 1983,he returned back to China without a moment’s hesitation.He has made up his minds to devote all his life to our country.
答案:
Mr Liu Jin,aging 39,is working in a factory in Shanghai as an chemical engineer.After he graduated from Nanjing University in 1978,he
sent to Tokyo University to study chemical engineering.Through her hard work for 4 years,he achieved remarkably results in scientific research.But he received a doctor’s degree in 1982.A Japanese company manager tried hard to invite him to work and promise to give him a good salary but he didn’t receive it.In 1983,he returned back
to China without a moment’s hesitation.He has made up his
to devote all his life to our country.
C
With the national college entrance examination approach,many students are too worried about the coming exam to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness.It’s a fair common phenomenon among us student.Here is some effective methods for you to adopt.
First of all,you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test.Secondly,it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions.I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress.Last but not least,you ought to believe yourselves and keep a good state of mind.Follow my tips,but you’ll overcome your exam anxiety.
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With the national college entrance examination ,many students are too worried about the coming exam to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness.It’s a fair common phenomenon among us .Here is some effective methods for you to adopt.
First of all,you should spend a
plenty of time preparing for the test.Secondly,it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions.I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress.Last but not least,you ought to believe
yourselves and keep a good state of mind.Follow my tips,but you’ll overcome your exam anxiety.
D
Li Ming and Wang Ying are student of Senior Three.They all work hard but they have different learning method.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher.As a result,he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework.But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep.However,Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning.She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class.Because this,she spends less time doing her homework,which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.
答案:
Li Ming and Wang Ying are student of Senior Three.They all work hard but they have different learning method.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher.As a result,he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework.But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep.However,Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning.She listens
and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class.Because
this,she spends less time doing her homework,which makes it is
possible for her to go to bed early.
E
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance,which carry them quickly to a hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped with death.
As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile,I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my
ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance,which carry them quickly to a hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped with death.
As some illegal businessmen
only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile,I do hope
whole society can realize the
of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.
Yours,
Li Hua
F
Last Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on our way home.I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash.Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away.I went up and found the two drivers bad injured,bleeding and trap in the taxis.Luckily,they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance.As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast.It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.
答案:
Last Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on our way home.I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went
loud crash.Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far
away.I went up and found the two drivers bad injured,bleeding and trap in the taxis.Luckily,they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance.As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast.It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and .
G
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next,trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possibly.
Yours,
Lily
答案:
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is
common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next,trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possibly.
Yours,
Lily
H
I’m writing to invite you to visit China and spending the summer vacation with me.I have made wonderful plan for it.First,we can go to Qingdao,there it is cool and mild,and have funs at the seaside.Then we were to participate in a taiji camp in the Wudang Mountains.You are curious about Chinese kung fu,but I believe this is a good chance to learn it.Last of all,I have also been longed to take you to the countryside.We can stay there for a few days and visit some relatives of me.I hope this plan suits you good and I am look forward to your coming.
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I’m writing to invite you to visit China and spending the summer vacation with me.I have made
wonderful plan for it.First,we can go to Qingdao,there it is cool and mild,and have funs at the seaside.Then we were to participate in a taiji camp in the Wudang Mountains.You are curious about Chinese kung fu,but I believe this is a good chance to learn it.Last of all,I have also been longed to take you to the countryside.We can stay there for a few days and visit some relatives of me.I hope this plan suits you good and I am look forward to your coming.
I
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm this year.It came sudden and went on for over three hours.After lunch,I went into my room to have a rest.The air was hot,but all was quiet.Then a strong wind started to blow into my room.Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window.As I ran out to catch it,big drop of rain began to fall.When I come back into the house,it was raining more harder and harder.Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house.When I ran out to find out that had happened,a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.
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Last Sunday I saw a worst storm this year.It came
and went on for over three hours.After lunch,I went into my room to have a rest.The air was hot,but all was quiet.Then a strong wind started to blow into my room.Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out
the open window.As I ran out to catch it,big drop of rain began to fall.When I come back into the house,it was raining more harder and harder.Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house.When I ran out to find out that had happened,a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.
J
There are many people think that wealth is better than health.I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce.He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted.Therefore,in the last twenty years of his life,his health began to get worse and he led a miserably life.Although the best doctors called for him,he could still find no relief.I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health,you will not be able to do what you want to do.So I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself and trying to make money.Instead,take care of your body and be happy with which you do.Health is more important.
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There are many people thinkthat wealth is better than health.I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce.He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted.Therefore,in the last twenty years of his life,his health began to get worse and he led a miserablylife.Although the best doctors
called for him,he could still find no relief.I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health,you will not be able to do what you want to do.So I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself and trying to make money.Instead,take care of your body and be happy with which you do.Health is more important.
K
Three years ago,I became a student in a ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I find the teachers patient and considerate.Besides,I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best use for it.I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties,they are always helpful.Soon,I became one of the top student in my class,what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated.
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines who you are.
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Three years ago,I became a student in a ordinary school. as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I find the teachers patient and considerate.Besides,I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best use for it.I worked hardly and got along well
my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties,they are always helpful.Soon,I became one of the top
in my class, greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated.
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that
how you use it that determines who you are.
L
Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother.He has been died for a year.When I was a teenager,he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn.We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning,stayed in local restaurant for breakfast,and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations.Just after dawn,he would find the right spot in the woods.He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement.Though I never hunted an animal successfully,but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.
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Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother.He has been died for a year.When I was a teenager,he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn.We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning,stayed in
local restaurant for breakfast,and then
on to one of his hunting destinations.Just after dawn,he would find the right spot in the woods.He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement.Though I never hunted an animal successfully,but
I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.
M
(2024·成都七中二诊模拟)
I often go to a weekend school.So did many of my classmates.This seems popular among students.Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies.Besides,we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.
So every coin has two sides.Our school work is already a heavy burden.Extra lesson often take up too much of the our time.In addition,pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.
答案:
I often go to a weekend school.So did many of my classmates.This seems popular among students.Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies.Besides,we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.
So every coin has two sides.Our school work is already a heavy burden.Extra lesson often take up too much of the
our time.In addition,pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.We may also find ourselves
tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.We should think seriously about this issue and make
best use of our time.
